In the Iris Gardens ~Composition 12

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I_StarkGuy's picture

*going to get a kleenex* you have such emotive fingers

NewFranzLiszt's picture

Just a comment on your playing: at 41, your attacking the keys too stiffly. Relaxing the arm and using more of the back will help produce a nicer tone. And at 37, is the left hand figure played with one hand? Without pedal that would be quite hard to slur, especially with small hands. To produce a steadier tone, I would use both hands ( or if you're doing that already, please notate it! ). I know somebody already already posted a comment along the same lines of one of your other pieces, but this is definitely one of the best examples of "popular style music". So much better than, say, garbage like Katy Perry.

cjbrandt's picture

Wonderful!

hillyhill1000's picture

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(No comment, too busy listening to song for 1000th time)

MaeThePirate's picture

Awwwz! I'm flattered ^_^

Mega's picture

@Mae --Great!

@tremcen-- Please don't swear publicly.... :(

Mega's picture

Oh, thanks for changing the comment. Now I look like an idiot for telling you not to swear after you say darn! :P

TheNewKid's picture

Geez...Now I gotta figure out how to express my feelings about this one....I LIKE IT (says the guy bouncing up and down =) ...one thing though...You play this one very expressively, but you changed a few rhythms... You might want to score the rhythms that you played. as well as dynamics!

MaeThePirate's picture

I can never seem to communicate these things into my sheet music >.< The dynamics I usually make up...

tremcen's picture

One word.... Darn!!! If you follow music, you will have one hell of a good career. This song is absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!

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