I like the rhythms and the way the fit into the bass. It's beautiful!
I've looked over several of your pieces, and I have concluded that you have a slight problem with your endings. In this piece, however, the ending was done quite well. I congratulate you on your moving line though; you do well with that. See, I play the piano, the clarinet, and percussion. So, I have quite a decent amount of experience with rhythm. I like your obscure rhythmic patterns; they coordinate well with the other parts.
Thanks for the comment! Yes, I definitely need to work on my endings. I'm glad you like my rhythms!
While I'm not sure that the amount of repetition used here is necessary, it isn't nearly as odious as in some other pieces I've seen lately, and does seem to serve a legitimate purpose.
Also, I really like the piano for this piece. Very cool, and the feel of it fits the title well.
Thanks for the comments. I'll try to avoid the repetition. I'm glad you like the piano part.
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