There's no melody, there's no rythm really and I made it like that because in life, there are not always melodys, exspecially with a broken heart.
I actually felt a broken heart in the beginning of this piece! But from bar 16 or so it kind of got lost. I wish you would work further with the first 15 bars, because thats really good!!! :)
Wait, b flat and a# are the same thing :) Like in measure 26, you would just wanna leave the a# a b flat :)
oh....yes i should probably fix that..... I will when my computer gets devirused ;) thanks Bonk
yeaup. so true. ^ sounds good. but CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM. you may wanna switch your key signature. quite a few flats. :) and mayyybbbeeee..... add some theme into the beginning 16 measures... :) add variety.
I love it! Maybe you can just add a rhythym to the bottom part when that first part is repeated :) This is WAYYYYYY better than some of my first songs... You should be proud!
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