Here is an arrangement I did of Greensleeves,
Two things. 1: Since you used concert pitch, it would have been clearer for the eye to give the bass clarinet and baritone sax parts a bass clef. 2: Were the alto and tenor saxes, trumpets, drumset, glockenspiel, and timpani just for taking up space? I ask because they were tacet (silent) for the entire duration of the arrangement.
How do you get so many measures per page?
I do not know, the only real format differences I made were changing it to "hide empty staves" and back again.
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