This is my first time transcribing and transposing music instead of just transcribing. It was tricky because of the keys. I do not own this music, but I arranged it similarly to my previous upload, in a way that I personally think sounds cool. Feel free to critique me!
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Very nice improvement! I still have a few notes. Firstly, I think it may be a good idea to add a bass part (Bari Sax/Bassoon?) that changes notes based on where the other instruments are going. Also, maybe you could make the Soprano and Tenor parts diverge at some parts, such as at measure 9 having the Tenor play with the Bass rather than the Soprano for one measure. I think that this is definitely a worthwhile piece.
I have fixed these problems and I think my final product is pretty solid. I dot want to go changing chords and adding too much extra stuff because ky goal is to make this accurate as possible. Do you have any other suggestions? Thanks!
It sounds near perfect, but I feel the instrument choice was lacking in general. It felt weak and monotone with just a xylophone on the melody. Maybe add a flute, or a trombone? You can just copy the xylophone part onto that and keep the xylophone, that might sound good. All I can say is that you should definitely experiment the possibilities, because there is definite potential in this arrangement.
Alright thank you, I haven't spent much time on this so I will update it in an hour and then please feel free to comment. I will now test it out. Thanks a bunch, I really appreciate your help!