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| Uploaded | Jun 9, 2012 |
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| Pages | 2 |
| Duration | 1:36 |
| Measures | 48 |
| Key signature | natural |
| Parts | 1 |
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| License | All rights reserved |
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| Uploaded | Jun 9, 2012 |
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| Pages | 2 |
| Duration | 1:36 |
| Measures | 48 |
| Key signature | natural |
| Parts | 1 |
| Part names |
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| License | All rights reserved |
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Comments (19)
hey MeaMettaurs3000, i think i can use that spam thing now hahahhahahahahaa
Like I have said before, although this is a common pop style, it it not always the best to repeat 4 chords over and over. For instance, the chord progresion in this song is Am, F, C, Em. Even something as simple as changing some of the chords around the second time, like doing Am, C, F, Em or G, would make it much more musical.
Those are the suggestions I have. BTW, I think all of your songs are great! You're one of the few pop-composers that I actually like!
Gererally, this would end on a whole note.
Perhaps this should be a half note, like the second note in this measure.
First, it's a half note, but from then on, it's a quarter-note. It would be better if it was consistent.
A double-bar line should be inserted here.
4 sharps should also be in the treble clef.
Beware: a little critisism is coming up.
real Different. in an awesome way! :) maybe fiddle with the soundfont. I know if you search Musescore.org soundfonts, it will bring you up to a ppage and there will be info on them, and about 5 free ones, one is a grand piano. :) try it out! lemme know what you think! :):):):)
Haha, i wrote a song for acoustic guitar with the same name about a year ago
Well, certainly excellent for a second composition, the musicality has certain complexities yet is still largely simplistic. But again for a second composition this is greatly impressive, perhaps a more lively tempo of Agitato, vivace or something along the lines of that which would sprite up the piece a little. The ending cadence is a little displeasing but this is only a minor detail, other than that, great composition!
At the risk of being redundant, very good second composition. You have serious potential. As I was listening to this, I was reminded of my own first songs. They in no wise compared to this. Good job. Keep it up. And thanks for sharing.
Happy trails, Flyingninja77
Hey, good job, the music reminds me of an anime, has an oriental touch, I'm surprised how well it grows the melody on the piece, very cute and sentimental, congratulations for your work, go on (sorry for mistakes in the comment i translate english in google , i'm from Uruguay) bye
I like this. You have some nice work here, especially for only your second work!
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Very Nice
This is beautiful. You have serious potential if this was only your second composition.
Aww thank you! (:
Nice composition
but you had work more on first measures and
I like modulations