Ragtime #3: George Takei Rag

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Uploaded on Apr 20, 2013

Happy birthday, George Takei! I've been working on this composition for about three months now and am pretty sure it's complete. (VIDEO SCORE TO THE RIGHT, made with the MuseScore MP3 of this piece. "Made Easy" arrangement at http://musescore.com/arthurbreur/george-takei-rag-made-easy.)

This piece is composed off the letters of George Takei's name (just continuing the additional letters of the alphabet up the scale after A-G), and from patterns created by other words and names from George's life. (I've marked out where the notes are derived directly from his name in the first melody.)

Section by section:

The first section is composed off of the letters of George Takei's name, and is intentionally upbeat and optimistic. The theme is intended to represent his youth, his early family life, and his overall personality. I had the pleasure of interviewing Mr. Takei by phone once a few years ago, and it was a delight speaking to him.

The second section represents the internment of Japanese Americans during World War II. It is a sad part of America's history, and George Takei has made it part of his life to bring awareness to a time when America didn't behave so beautifully. The section is composed in a minor key, reflects the melodies of songs of Americana, and is intentionally composed so the melody and the accompaniment are not lined up, as the situation at the time was not in alignment with our country's principles.

The third section is all about Hollywood. The melody plays on the many celebratory melodies about Hollywood and show business, right up to the "big finish" cadences that lead the section into...

The fourth section comes as a surprise and suddenly turns a corner into very different places than the earlier sections, while intentionally keeping rhythms and references to other moments in the piece. The melody (if I do say so myself) is classy and sophisticated, even "cool"—the proud protagonist has found his stride, and it's more than just OK to be Takei.

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Pages 4
Duration 03:47
Measures 86
Key signature natural
Parts 1
Part names Piano
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Congratulations for this composition and for your nomination "Musescorer of the month" (March 2017) http://blog.musescore.com/post/158136004399/welcome-to-marchs-edition-of-musescorer-of-the Bravo! (Applause.) :D
Love it ! You have made a really great rag !
Thank you! I'm very pleased with both the music and that I used the musical form to tell the general story of George Takei's life.
Just downloaded Aliceisnolady and now here's a great tune saluting a great American actor! Thanks!
Thank you, Ken! My apology for the slow reply to this one, but I somehow missed the notice that you'd commented on it back at the end of July!
You and asheboy to be honest is my two favorite composers in musescore! I love to listen to your soundcloud music and unlike any other musescore music i appreciate the beautiful structure of the music whilee i am reading or studying. My favorite piece :"love too early"
Thank you, Kevin. "Love Too Soon, Love Too Late" did turn out to be a haunting tune. It's the alternate chords under the melody that give it such a unique feel and mood.
Awesome! I always loved rag ever since I was a boy. This piece is a magnificent work!!!!! Love measure 22-25 a lot!
Thank you, Kevin. When I composed the second section of this piece, I knew the feeling I wanted, but I was surprised by the final result. It's the least "ragtime" section in the piece, but it still fits nicely in my opinion.
Wonderful! Please share your thoughts on playing it. I know if I were not the composer, I would have some things to say to me about a few of the passages. After most of a year, I'm still challenged by a few of the passages—though I'm hardly a concert pianist. I would love to hear you perform the piece, either YouTube/videoscore or as a SoundCloud recording!
I don't know if I will once be able to play it correctly, it is really not easy ^^ but if I do I'll make a record if you want :)
There is a simpler version -- and ragtime is a loose enough genre that it's common to tweak the exact notes and just *play* the general idea. Simpler version is at http://musescore.com/arthurbreur/george-takei-rag-made-easy.
By the way, why, in the first three measures of the left hand, the treble key is offset by two notches down? With a normal treble key the first note would be an E, but obviously it is meant to be a G...
THANK YOU! It's not an E, but in fact is a G -- however, I grabbed the wrong clef from the MuseScore clef selections. If you look closely, you'll see that the "cross-hairs" made by the loop in the treble clef on the lower staff are targeting the first line of the staff, not the second. I was taught that the treble clef is a stylized "G", and that the "cross-hairs" on the clef (where the clef circles around its own vertical line) are supposed to point to where G is on the staff. So the note to be played there IS a G, I just have the incorrect clef positioning on that staff. Fixing it now!
The third section (Hollywood) is AMAZING !
Thank you, Sepehr. And just wait until you hear the live performance. I'm getting pretty good at playing this now (I'd better, as I'm performing it live in front of an audience for the first time in just TWO WEEKS). The Hollywood section is cool, and the fourth section is much better live than MIDI.
Arthur, this is an amazing piece and I've been learning it for the past month. It's really challenging and more so with the indicated speed :) I'm really looking forward to see a video of you playing it (I hope there will be one once).
Edited May 6, 2013: Corrected harmonies in 4th section.
Minor edits made to the fourth section -- it was impossible to play some of what I had originally arranged, and the final chord was bugging me.
...and then fixed a couple of stinkers in my edits.
Awesome! This is a very good ragtime! It totally puts off a story in 3 and half minutes, and an accurate story at that.
Thank you. As with any person, George Takei's life is far richer than a single musical piece could convey. I am doing my best not to second-guess all the things I ommited. He well deserves a full concert worth of compositions. I hate to sound like I am "gushing", but the man has achieved some remarkable things for Japanese-Americans and the LGBT comunity, and he is talented and delightfully charming. And if I say much more, there's going to be a restraining order with my name on it! ;)
You are the Best ! Have you seen this ? http://blog.musescore.com/post/48694588237/warp-speed-mr-sulu
Yes, I saw the blog post (I had pointed out the George Takei tweet in the "Improving MuseScore.com" group discussion). They pointed out that they had blogged about this, and then included a link to the blog post in their email newsletter. It has been a fun experience seeing the attention that single tweet caused. It's all an unexpected treat.
Wonderful, I wish could still play, I would learn this. George Takei has a very humourous side too. See him at the 'roast' of William Shatner. His voice gets ever deeper.
Thank you, John. Yes, George Takei's sense of humor is pretty awesome, especially in that he doesn't seem to take HIMSELF too seriously. He's able to be earthy while simultaneously remaining extremely classy, in a way that not many people can manage.
Wow, this is impressive! George Takei has always been one of my favorite people ever. And congratulations with the mention by Mr. Takei himself!
I would never have guessed you were a George Takei fan (http://musescore.com/user/3673/scores/36061) Thank you!
Nice to see this finished... and congrats on getting the shoutout :)
I didn't know George Takei before this rag... Fuck me right?? But that was very pleasant to hear!
Thanks, Felix. And he is a pretty amazing person; the sections in the ragtime piece barely scratch the surface.
Bravo! I'm glad you eventually finished it!
Thanks, Albert! I have been agonizing over the last section pretty much since I posted the previous "in progress" version. All of a sudden, the piece (seemingly with a mind of its own) was jumping into a completely different key and direction with no sign of coming back. Unless I was going to continue chromatically rising all the way up through the scale in one section, the section was never going to get back to a spot I could repeat it—and while I'm hardly a stickler for always ending in the same key I start in, I at least was hoping to end the piece with a satisfying (and "comfortable") resolution. The result is very satisfying to me, though I'm still pondering how I can make the finale take up a full sixteen measures instead of twelve. (And pondering what 4-bar intro I might use!)
So George Takei saw the piece and tweeted its link last night. I'm honored—and I expect MuseScore.com might just have a little more traffic in the future. ;)
Molto carina,come l' altra Ragtime
This is the first time I've ever created an account on a site just so I could leave a comment. Brilliantly fun and creative! Helluva musical tribute. Bravo.
Thank you very much, Bob! I'm honored and touched that you would go through that effort to let me know that you liked the piece. How goes it with the BN Critters? http://www.bncritters.com