AURORA

[user=4421]Stel[/user]

...I HAVE to arrange this for harp. You don't mind, right?

[user=4286]AtmanSeijo[/user]

lollyra. :3

[user=14997]AshBoy[/user]

Go ahead! I'm just glad you like it!

[user=13522]Joshua A. I.[/user]

Really Good AshBoy. Very impressive with how you blend the violins with cellos and bases. One critique though, when you try to give people the melody, make sure that it still blends in with the counters or harmonic line. That way, people won't focus just on one phrase of music, but the whole piece as one composition. But overall, it is very stunning amazing. Keep up the good job.

[user=14935]brubeckpiano314[/user]

Whoa! That is impressive! Good job!

[user=15233]trumpetdude314[/user]

This is best composition I've heard on here so far! It almost sounds like you had some inspiration from Klaus Badelt or Hanz Zimmer's Pirates of the Caribbean scores. So lively and energetic, I love it!

[user=14997]AshBoy[/user]

Thank you! Yeah, Hans Zimmer's movie scores are some of my favorites. The end definitely sounds something like that.

[user=13898]Cello1912[/user]

wow this is really good, don't take this offensively but you got to control dynamics some parts sound like all instruments are just crushed together and you can't hear their part well, but asides from that it sounded spectacular.

[user=14997]AshBoy[/user]

Yeah, the piece definetly needs to have more contrast in that aspect, I can see what you mean. Thanks a lot for the feedback, I don't like it when people are afraid to say what they really think, I don't learn anything from it.

[user=13870]MusicOfTheBandFake[/user]

BTW this is epic XD

[user=14997]AshBoy[/user]

Sure, what do you want help with?

[user=13870]MusicOfTheBandFake[/user]

Um dude when you said "Expand your Inventory" would you mind helping me with an orchestral piece? I'm not any good with strings or sub melodies. All I can do is come up with the main melodies.

[user=13870]MusicOfTheBandFake[/user]

Oh I just realized your comment that you posted... I didn't look at the date :D um well I need some help with "The Vicious Attack" I'm also composing another film related song called "Marching Through The Battle" it will use parts from "Inland March" but will be expanded and arranged for an orchestra! :P I wish I was better with harmonies like you :D I love this BTW ;)

[user=15188]musicqueen[/user]

Interesting piece. Some parts I think dont fit but I believe that has more to do the the Double basses and the violas are to loud and almost cover up the main melody as it is being played. nothing you have any control over due to the software I believe. Keep building and experimenting. i noticed your a string player but try to reach out side your comfort zone and add one new intrument at a time.

[user=15233]trumpetdude314[/user]

Well, when you listen to it, you can always go to the mixer and turn down the volume for certain parts.

[user=14997]AshBoy[/user]

Thanks a lot, I've just recently started composing, so I really value your feedback. I'm going to try to make it flow better, thanks again!

[user=14997]AshBoy[/user]

Thanks! I only really have 3 pieces on here though, including this, I need to expand my inventory more

[user=3834]domnotte[/user]

Wow, this is fantastic. Off to listen to your other stuff now--this really, I'm taken aback.

[user=4286]AtmanSeijo[/user]

Amazing. I'm still surprised you thought I was better than you. :D

[user=15088]LSluyter[/user]

I'd say the ending you added to it fits quite well.

[user=14955]TripleF[/user]

Stunning all around.