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The double bass

A double bass goes to a psychiatrist.
Double bass: Doctor, someone told me I sound depressed.
Doctor: Let's hear it!
Double bass: G - D - ,A - 'E.
The psychiatrist's face darkens.
Doctor: I refer you to a good friend of mine. He will operate on you.
Double bass: And what will become of me then?
Doctor: A cello, a viola and a violin.

Give me some feedback please

https://musescore.com/user/14411621/scores/5731232

A waltz I've been writing. My biggest weakness is having strong melodies/themes so this is mainly just me trying to strengthen that in a style I enjoy to write. Very much unfinished but PLEASE critique me I would love to improve especially if it's a little thing. Even if you just listen to it that'd be awesome. Thanks so much, have a good day