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I'm trying to compose my own music but I can't seem to do it well; Any advice?

I have finished my next composition recently and I,d really would like an non biased   opinion. Yes, i know, the ending is pretty lame, but I ran out of ideas.
https://musescore.com/user/31647640/scores/5882441

 
https://musescore.com/user/30571658/scores/5868826

 
https://musescore.com/user/30571658/scores/5868826

 
https://musescore.com/user/30571658/scores/5868826

and if you think other wise go jump in a river

https://musescore.com/user/33252896/scores/5872210

Revised and somewhat extended as was recommended.  Let me  what you think now.  Thanks.

https://musescore.com/user/33252896/scores/5872210

Revised and slightly extended as was recommended.  What comments do you have now?

Henri Dutilleux is missing here unless I Don't look at the right place...so I decided to start uploading some of his amazing work. 
First try with "Bergerie", a 1947 composition 

https://musescore.com/user/30478181/scores/5885049

Does anyone on this discussion know the way the strings are numbered e. g Ukulele or Guitar. GCEA  EADBGE  Which string is the A, so I can number them. 
Thanks. 

My friend and I would like to do a duet together on this song, but I haven't found any pieces that are just Oboe and Piano, I know it's kind of a weird combo, but if anyone can make one or knows of one that'd be great! I was going to make my own, but I figured if there was someone out there who's already done it or knows how and is willing to, they could do a better job than me, so please let me know!

This is a gospel song that i had made last year. Plz tell me what u think 
https://musescore.com/user/28797244/scores/5885037

This is a Christmas song that i had made in 2018 and didnt even think of sharing it with the world until now. I was a freshman when i made dis song, so it might sound a bit...rusty. But plz tell me what u think!
https://musescore.com/user/28797244/scores/5885017

This Étude is about improving speed, accent marks, and arpeggios.
If you are interested, please do take a look.
Thank you

https://musescore.com/tropnk/spanish-dance-etude-op-7

This is a song that i originally made for a Steven Universe fanfiction that I'm writing on Wattpad, but it is also for a person that you really like and you want them to get to like you or whatever. i haven't put any lyrics in but, you can maybe come up with some. (yes, i due write stories as well)  plz tell me what u think.
https://musescore.com/user/28797244/scores/5883710

This is a song that i originally made for a Steven Universe fanfiction that I'm writing on Wattpad, but it is also for a person that you really like and you want them to get to like you or whatever. i haven't put any lyrics in but, you can maybe come up with some. (yes, i due write stories as well)  plz tell me what u think.
https://musescore.com/user/28797244/scores/5883710

This is a short song for the people who can't go a day without having an argument. Even on Christmas. plz go on my page and tell me what u think. 

https://musescore.com/user/28797244/scores/5884920

This Étude is about improving speed, accent marks, and arpeggios.
If you are interested, please do take a look.
Thank you

https://musescore.com/tropnk/spanish-dance-etude-op-7

I had made a short song that is dedicated to 2 very loved students at Woodlawn High. And one of them was a "friend"(associate) that i used to a while back for a little. His name was Ashton and he had gotten shot when he stepped off the bus while being in a gang. The other, gotten really sick and died. I never knew him but I'm sure that he was a great kid. The day of the balloon release (which was my birthday Dec. 6) was when i had made this short song for them called What Have We Come To  It has no lyrics, but plz tell me what you think whenever I upload it, and plz pray that no more of our loved ones will die by such cruelty. #RIPAshton