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Need someone to help me finishing this piece

Hey guys! :) A few month ago I started to compose a piece. Now I'm still working on it, but I haven't got any further ideas. That's why I need your help. I would be very pleased if anyone is motivated to finish this composition. So feel free to send me a message or just finish or adjust this piece how you like and send me a link or anything if your finished, that would be very cool. Thank you! I hope you'll be having fun with it! :)

https://musescore.com/user/1027041/scores/5832044 

Any advice on musicality?

 
https://musescore.com/user/29005123/scores/5828502

This score began as a 7-bar intro that  I did years ago and left to gather dust. I decided more recently to take it and finish it, and in doing so, created less of a coherent piece and more of a musical exploration.

My question is, would anyone be willing to offer advice on any of the parts in the piece itself? I know the piece is all over the place but any opinions on the individual sections would be much appreciated as I'm always trying to  improve myself!