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I'm trying to compose my own music but I can't seem to do it well; Any advice?

I have finished my next composition recently and I,d really would like an non biased   opinion. Yes, i know, the ending is pretty lame, but I ran out of ideas.
https://musescore.com/user/31647640/scores/5882441

 
https://musescore.com/user/30571658/scores/5868826

 
https://musescore.com/user/30571658/scores/5868826

Does anyone have any Vocaloid songs they want me to recompose as sheet music?

and if you think other wise go jump in a river

https://musescore.com/user/33252896/scores/5872210

Revised and somewhat extended as was recommended.  Let me  what you think now.  Thanks.

https://musescore.com/user/30478181/scores/5885049

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This is my third Nocturne in Db Major, composed for "Mrs.Topping." I like how this one turned out to be honest, much better than the previous one at least.

Nocturne No.3 in Db Major (KJC 7): https://musescore.com/kjc/scores/5884144

This is my third Nocturne in Db Major, composed for "Mrs.Topping." I like how this one turned out to be honest, much better than the previous one at least.

Nocturne No.3 in Db Major (KJC 7): https://musescore.com/kjc/scores/5884144

This is my third Nocturne in Db Major, composed for "Mrs.Topping." I like how this one turned out to be honest, much better than the previous one at least.

Nocturne No.3 in Db Major (KJC 7): https://musescore.com/kjc/scores/5884144

This is my third Nocturne in Db Major, composed for "Mrs.Topping." I like how this one turned out to be honest, much better than the previous one at least.

Nocturne No.3 in Db Major (KJC 7): https://musescore.com/kjc/scores/5884144

https://musescore.com/user/27553339/scores/5883074

Hi!  I seem to recall there used to be a way to specify/choose various muted brass timbres, but I'm having trouble relocating that info: am I misremembering?  (My present need is for an F-horn "con sordino," but I'd appreciate the general knowledge of either how to or where to find such timbre mods.)  Thanks!

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I arranged another piece from Morse. Check it out, let me know what you think. Chances are, if you comment on mine, I'll take a look at yours. https://musescore.com/user/31989152/scores/5882300

Lake of Serenity
https://musescore.com/user/20379356/scores/5799231
Rise and Fall
https://musescore.com/user/20379356/scores/5799208

I just arranged a version of Bach's Cello Suite no. 1 Prelude.

Could really use any opinions!

 
https://musescore.com/user/32448352/scores/5883815

 
https://musescore.com/iroth/shattered-minds
This is written for a Bari Sax and B-flat wind with piano accompaniment, but the piano is the real hero of this piece. Enjoy and let me know what you guys think!