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I'm trying to compose my own music but I can't seem to do it well; Any advice?

It's for the vocaloid song 'Wave' by niki ft. lily, I'd really appreciate it if you looked it over. Thanks so much!

https://musescore.com/user/30399060/scores/5871882

I have finished my next composition recently and I,d really would like an non biased   opinion. Yes, i know, the ending is pretty lame, but I ran out of ideas.
https://musescore.com/user/31647640/scores/5882441

can someone give me tips on composing classically in the likes of Mozart, Dvorak, Beethoven etc.

 
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Does anyone have any Vocaloid songs they want me to recompose as sheet music?

https://musescore.com/user/29824729/scores/5879061

I finished arranging “Thou Didst Leave Thy Throne,” a wonderful lesser-sung Christmas hymn. I hope you enjoy it! Merry Christmas!

and if you think other wise go jump in a river

I was about to but I broke my arm so rip

Revised and slightly extended taking into account your recommendations.  Take another listen, people.  Let me know what you think now.  Thanks.

https://musescore.com/user/33252896/scores/5872210

I had made a song that's called What Have We Come To for the kids that got killed at my school, 4 days b4 my birthday. One of them was an associate that i used to talk to who had gotten shot in the stomach. His name was Ashton. The other kid had lose a fight againt an illness. I never knew him but i bet he was a great kid. Please go on my page and look for this song and tell me what u think. Plz pray that no more of our loved ones will die of cruelty.

https://musescore.com/user/28797244/scores/5883816

https://musescore.com/user/33252896/scores/5872210

Revised and somewhat extended as was recommended.  Let me  what you think now.  Thanks.

https://musescore.com/user/33252896/scores/5872210

Revised and slightly extended as was recommended.  What comments do you have now?

Henri Dutilleux is missing here unless I Don't look at the right place...so I decided to start uploading some of his amazing work. 
First try with "Bergerie", a 1947 composition 

https://musescore.com/user/30478181/scores/5885049

As an intermediate pianoist, i started playing piano ever since my brain developed enough for me (3). I was a freshman and i was in piano class and i played songs that i was supposed to but, why did my teacher give me a D? Maybe because of a test? Or she didnt like me? What do yall think? Be truthfull, i wont be hurt by any response.

Does anyone on this discussion know the way the strings are numbered e. g Ukulele or Guitar. GCEA  EADBGE  Which string is the A, so I can number them. 
Thanks.