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Any advice on musicality?

 
https://musescore.com/user/29005123/scores/5828502

This score began as a 7-bar intro that  I did years ago and left to gather dust. I decided more recently to take it and finish it, and in doing so, created less of a coherent piece and more of a musical exploration.

My question is, would anyone be willing to offer advice on any of the parts in the piece itself? I know the piece is all over the place but any opinions on the individual sections would be much appreciated as I'm always trying to  improve myself!