Feedback please!

Dec 22, 2019

I just started composing (literally five minutes ago). I am very insecure, so there are only 2 lines and I already want feedback. I want this to be good, so all feedback (especially bad) is helpful!
https://flat.io/score/5dfff1f31492a87476498a7f-beautiful-river-valley?sharingKey=0082045e6edf214df8738d6142ff46172c76f3dc22576c1721cec62597d45c72e1f3773667ec68e35de5e9980c8dcdf6e0416aabf94175aea21d9be8857a6204


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