Help appreciated

Hey guys, this is going to be one of my next projects, if any of you can help me out with anything that needs fixing (like measure 17, I need help on the drum part). If you are familiar with Alex Hahn, then you might know this tune. If you are able to, can you tell me what I need to do to fix the problems I have with this project.

Edit: I am dumb forgot the link https://musescore.com/user/28270784/scores/5192679

P.S. I need to learn how to do strings say nothing about it if you can

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4 days ago
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Calm & Intense...?

 Hello fellow peoples,

I am currently writing a piece on a program called "Fl Studios" based off the idea of being stranded in the ocean during a storm. With that said, The song gives off the idea of both a calming and intense feeling at the same time..... is this possible in music? Also if I were to follow this idea of mine (Calm & Intense) should I start intense and slowly die down like a storm does or should I start calm as if the storm has died down but there are still elements of it? (I am using audio of the ocean and thunder that my brother recorded a few years ago) 

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7 days ago
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Looking for feedback on two interesting pieces I wrote

Hey guys! I’m looking for feedback on two pieces I wrote, both of which are very modern, unique, and my best pieces in my opinion. The two pieces are very different: one of them is a long piece for concert wind ensemble, and the other is a short lament written for just three strings. Anyways, I’d really appreciate any comments on these, and the links to them below. If you like what you hear, feel free to listen to or comment on my other music, as well:

https://musescore.com/user/24020016/scores/5170836


https://musescore.com/user/24020016/scores/5018741

Thank you! Have a great day!

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16 days ago
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I'm new and need some feedback for my latest project . . . please.

Hello all. I recently finished a mostly by-ear arrangement of Andrew Lloyd Webber's "The Phantom of the Opera". I was particularly concerned about accuracy in terms of instrumentation and so forth. If someone could take a look and give me some pointers, I'd greatly appreciate it. Please ignore the lack of dynamic variation or orchestration. Those are still works in progress.

https://musescore.com/user/20941876/scores/5166523

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26 days ago
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Feedback

I recently completed a piece for a composition competition and I was hoping to get some feedback. I won't be changing anything since it is for a competition, but I want to know what I can do better next time. This was my first time writing for this many instruments and I really enjoyed making it.
Link to score: https://musescore.com/user/22256626/scores/5168943

Btw, if you're interested in competitions and promts you should join MusiComp prompts. Every week there are 4 different prompts added: 1 theory, 1 concept, 1 Story, and 1 emotion
Link to group: https://musescore.com/groups/mcp

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26 days ago
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