Looking for feedback

Jul 9, 2019

Hello there!
This is my minimalistic composition; Lifetime. I was asked to compose a short piece. I had the melody in a draft file and I remember it. My inspirations were always Reich and Glass — as far is considered about minimalism.
The second composition is a waltz and it was composed a few months ago.
I would like to read some constructive criticism on the composition; good or bad.
Thank you very much