Minecraft Original Music video?

Dec 15, 2017

Hi there, So I just joined for this reason, The rest of my musescore friends I don't think would understand, But I made a Minecraft "Music video" Even though its not a video (yet)
But I wanted feedback, Any constructive criticism would be appreciated!
(sorry, my voice isn't made for modern singing lol)

https://soundcloud.com/user-831024019/kitskate1xs-song-1
https://musescore.com/kristiroller/justacc-blah

Lyrics:

I was a Noob,
At least thats what you told me,
You'll die tonigh
if you choose to leave me,
Still by the torchlight,
I wanted to go
, Help you Fight the mobs.
To help you go mining,
Find the Sparkles below,
But you don't want me to go!
I will prove to you,
I can find the diamonds,
I will start anew,
With my pick in hand
I will kill the mobs,
Fighting for survival
Just to prove to you,
that I can do it to.
The night is long.
The zombies are prowling,
I'm mining on,
Off to the end of the journey,
With diamond equipment
and enchanted bow,
geared from head to tow.
I found the end portal
and i'm ready to go,
Off into the unknown!
...
Now I'm standing strong,
On the EnderDragon.
Will you come along?
Now I'm Diamond clad?
See I proved you wrong!
Now we can fight together,
And with this song,
I proved it to you!!


~ Kristi Roller
EDIT: OKAY SO I EMAILED THIS TO CAPTAINSPARKLEZ, AND NFEN VIEWED IT ON SOUNDCLOUD. IS THIS REAL LIFE. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH


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