Review of a little ticklish song afeter reading about harmony

May 31, 2019

I've been studing (by myself) harmony and composition by Arnold Schoenberg and revised an old song I made:
Any mistakes?
How can I make it more pleasing to hear?
Any better books on composition?
Waht do you think of the litte song? (the intent is to imitate the act of tickling, there is even a feather kkkk)