Help Please

Jun 5, 2019

Would someone mind looking at this score I just made up? It is not finished, I figured this would be the middle-end part of the score and I need suggestions on how to start it out. Thanks!
https://flat.io/score/5cf7b6477997ed47706723f5-pubouhybuh
p.s. ignore the 1st eight 32nd notes in measure 8, it sounded better than the trill


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