My first song !

Jan 9, 2020

Hi everyone !
How are you ?
I just made a new piece (which is also my first song), and I wrote the lyrics in English. But it is'nt my mother tongue.
Can anyone correct the mystakes I made please ?
Thank you !
https://musescore.com/user/31801492/scores/5920850
Also, I would really like to know what you think about what I did
Thank you !


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