Melody 1 lucaskrumenaur 216views | 0 favorites | 18 comments Download Share Favorite × Share Choose where you want to share: Link to this page Embed on your site × Download this score The score can be downloaded in the format of your preference: MuseScore Open in MuseScore PDF View and print MusicXML Open in various software MIDI Open in editors and sequencers MP3 Listen to this score Your download has started. Having troubles downloading? Try again lucaskrumenaur worked hard on this score. Want to give something back?Give a small token of appreciation! Send a reward Your download has started. Having troubles downloading? Try again More of this, please? Follow to get notified when lucaskrumenaur has uploaded new scores. Or give a reward instead × Print To print parts, please upgrade to a Pro account first. Go Pro Select part Download PDF Print Why am I seeing this? Uploaded on Apr 24, 2019 Pages 1 Duration 01 Measures 20 Key signature 1 sharp Parts 1 Part names Piano Privacy Everyone can see this score License None (All rights reserved) Show more Show less Your comment Comments [user=31989152]cellomorelikehello[/user] A good start, but it definitely needs some variation to it. Someone mentioned a minor part. [user=29844265]MusiKals[/user] If you don't mind, can I make another piece based on your melody? I'll give you credit for your melody. [user=2458231]lucaskrumenaur[/user] Sure thing! [user=7476831]Teodor Lontos[/user] The melodic line wasn't too repetitive but the rhythm certainly was. Also, the time signature is wrong. A 6/4 is made out of 2 groups of 3 quarter notes. The melody you've written is in 12/8, made out of 4 groups of 3 eighth notes. So change that too! [user=2458231]lucaskrumenaur[/user] Done, thanks for the tip! [user=31928360]joshuacali1[/user] no offense i find it a little repetitive. maybe add a minor key or a line that trails of a little bit [user=31273168]Gabe Bilbe[/user] It's an enjoyable melody, and with the right elements added, such as an accompanying harmony, it could be a great piece of music. [user=20969656]OmgLol LolOmg[/user] Would you give me the right to create a variation on this piece, using its already established melody? [user=2458231]lucaskrumenaur[/user] Sure! [user=20969656]OmgLol LolOmg[/user] Thanks for allowing me to make an edited version of this! I'm also pretty new to composition and I feel its most important to just have fun making music! Heres my version: https://musescore.com/user/20969656/scores/5542338 [user=2458231]lucaskrumenaur[/user] It's realy exiting hearing this melody gaining color, thanks! [user=31853437]ains197501[/user] In some parts, it reminded me of Never Enough. It was good though. [user=30575272]Ryougine U[/user] しっかりしテーマだと思います。 難点は、終わりが、終わった感が無い事。 コード付けて、低音域の土台作り、 中音域でカウンターメロディーつけたら、 曲の輪郭出てくるので、楽しくま待ってます。＾ｖ＾ 私も独学作曲なので、これくらいしか助言できません。 でも、曲を生み出そうとうする力が、きっと良い方向に導いてくれます。 [user=31942979]Exetior[/user] At first it reminded me of a little nursery rhyme song I learned as a kid, but, it's quite a nice simple little melody! Not too repetitive at all, but I'd actually suggest an A the octave below the second to last note as an ending. [user=28057286]EthanHarris[/user] It's a nice melody that makes sense musically. Now try adding a harmony to make it more interesting to the ear. [user=28057286]EthanHarris[/user] That's the only feedback i have for you :) [user=9152281]Kirara Wright[/user] With your permission I'd like to improve it. [user=2458231]lucaskrumenaur[/user] Of course!