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This is my first string composition and honestly its not very good, I can't put my finger on what I need to improve and how to improve it though. Any and all tips help a TON. Thank you. 
https://musescore.com/user/30723247/scores/5648878

Hello! I've posted in this group a few times and I am a young composer in high school. My name is Ryan Guerra, and I still have no idea what the hell I'm doing.I would love any tips, notes or ideas anyone can offer, I want to learn as much as I can. Check out my music here! Thank you.
https://musescore.com/user/30723247

What is your favourite:
1. meal of the day (breakfast, morning tea, dessert, etc.) 
2. simple meal/dish (4 or less ingredients, minimal cooking)
3. complex meal/dish (not a simple dish)
4. confectionery brand

My faves:
Breakfast
Bacon in a toast sandwich with butter
Sweet & sour pork (it's chinese)
Allens

でも、フルートの入った曲描のすきです。

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