Looking for feedback on two interesting pieces I wrote

Hey guys! I’m looking for feedback on two pieces I wrote, both of which are very modern, unique, and my best pieces in my opinion. The two pieces are very different: one of them is a long piece for concert wind ensemble, and the other is a short lament written for just three strings. Anyways, I’d really appreciate any comments on these, and the links to them below. If you like what you hear, feel free to listen to or comment on my other music, as well:

https://musescore.com/user/24020016/scores/5170836


https://musescore.com/user/24020016/scores/5018741

Thank you! Have a great day!

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16 days ago
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Constructive criticism for my composition

I would greatly appreciate any critique yall have for this composition.  As an amateur composer looking to improve, its nice when people tell you it sounds good, but the only way to improve is to understand where you fell short and what you can do better.  Please be constructive and don't simply say "I don't like it" because that gives me nothing to work with.  In the description I include a link to a Youtube video with audio of me actually performing it.  I thought that would be better than a synthesized recording.  Thank you guys a bunch!

https://musescore.com/user/189201/scores/5074016

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3 months ago
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